“The story was pretty good, though obviously a first attempt. There are Manu instances of repeated discriptions of the same thing in successive sentences, and giving the full name of the store every time was a little wearing. Character development was good, but could have been more refined. In short the story needed an editor.
The only other major thing was the reading, the author, with his too obvious accent made it hard to listen to. Someone with an American or british accent would have been better, and the cost to hire them would have been well worth it.”
Sebotheos via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
05/13/10