Starchild Part Four
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Part Four might as well be titled “Meet the Lorencips!”—your average, dorky Midwestern family. Except, occasionally they talk in a language Ruby has never heard before. And none of them seem to know what “meatloaf” is. Also, they have a semi-sentient AI hologram in the basement. Fiora holographically takes Ruby to her home planet, and it quickly becomes apparent why the Lorencips came to Earth. I discuss the importance of not italicizing different languages in fiction, characters thinking about their emotions rather than feeling them, and Starchild as an immigrant narrative.   Below is a link to the article I referenced for further reading on italicization:  “The Case Against Italicizing ‘Foreign’ Words.” Barokka, Khairani.  https://catapult.co/stories/column-the-case-against-italicizing-foreign-words-khairani-barokka 
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