“The book needs re-editing for Audio. And could use a little polishing to remove a few annoying cliches. The narrator has a great voice but a poor microphone and no pop guard or level control, he struggles with the narrative occasionally due to a sentence structure not suitable for audio. Characterizations are OK and should get better with experience. The story line is great. Pacing is a bit slow, again editing needed. So in summary a great story but you will suffer from the lack of professional editing and microphone pitch variations along with narrator slips. I experienced personal impatience with the problems mentioned above yet the story itself kept me coming back for another chapter. Now I'm ready for the next production which must be coming since we are left with quite a cliff hanger. Thank you to the author and narrator for their production, I know it's not easy and I hope you are encouraged to continue.”
Pebart via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
04/21/11