“I feel the story would be better told by sticking to the facts and minimizing the dramatization. Interviews with the people in the story could enhance it instead.
For a dramatization, the script came across as painfully stilted, simplistic and cliche. If the intended audience is adults, the script needs a major overhaul. If written by high school kids for a high school audience, it’s perhaps a decent start to learning how to write.”
PrairieVoyageur via Apple Podcasts ·
Canada ·
02/23/21