“Some constructive criticism for the narrator. You should read the story out loud to yourself a few times and know it a bit before narrating live. It’s clear your reading direct from the page rather than ‘telling a story’ and It sounds like your reading it for the first time when recording. It’s lacking some feeling likely due to your seeming unfamiliarity with the story. You read some statements as questions like your asking the listener if you got it right, and pause when you carry sentences over to the next page. It reminds me of when the teacher makes you read in class. Minor things, but will make your narrations more fluid. Keep working at it :)”
User14367 via Apple Podcasts ·
Canada ·
01/19/21