“With some quirky ( at times annoying) transitions and unnecessary dialog, AS Fry has something here. As I was listening, I kept envisioning a series for television. There were some good things in this awkward little gem. With some fine tuning this piece could go somewhere. Loose the blue laser beams coming from the teachers eyes ( u had me complete until then) . The characters were believable- I really started to care for them ( even through some of the clumsy dialog) maybe a little more compassion for the victims... This would be a series I could follow.”
purplekhanee via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
03/20/11