“This One has so much potential but the plot gets lost in the script. This is audio, you have to lead your audience a bit more . Describe your surroundings and location. I know it’s dragging if you get bogged down in details but we need more information. Having knowledge of the original story helps but with out it I think most listening would be completely lost half way through. I do love the setting of the story and bold retelling. The cast is large and mostly talented with only a few weak spots. My advice next time slow down tell the story develop the characters and keep the action hot and fast. Three stars maybe generous but I give credit for retelling this story in such a bold way.”
LeroyLightniin via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
08/15/22