“The stories are vaguely interesting, but the way they are told does them no justice and frankly made me feel like even at 20 minutes a podcast episode is a waste of my time.
The writing needs improvement. There’s a lot of extraneous language that doesn’t add to the story at all and making it more concise will make it more compelling. For example there’s a description of someone sending a Facebook message and she describes in excruciating detail. You don’t need to say she looked in the other messages inbox and then looked at the message and hit reply. You can just say they had a back-and-forth and get to the point.
Towards the end there’s an attempt at metaphor and analogy which is very clumsy and because the groundwork hadn’t really been laid down earlier in the episode it really just felt like attacked on attempt at creating significance.”
Adeerable via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
10/27/20