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“One of the best narrators ever on a podcast. As for the story, definitely could use a lot of work. Great background and premise. Has a tremendous amount of potential. However, if a story is to develop through dialogue, the dialogue must be believable. People don't talk like this, ever. People don't talk like this during combat, during life threatening situations, when unbelievable things happen, the list goes on. It's as if the author is forcing the characters to ignore the elephant in the room to keep the story from unfolding.
I really wanted to like this podcast. The world the author created could have been amazing. But with the current dialogue, it just left me bewildered, frustrated, and thoroughly unsatisfied. To be fair, the book has so much potential that I'd give it another try if they fixed the dialogue and actually allowed the story to develop.”
Autoredial via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
11/26/12
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“Wow...what a great story. Wasn't expecting...well, from the description, I wasn't sure what to expect, but now totally absorbed in the story and characters. A new episode just downloaded and I can't wait to hear it. ADDED 10/31/09: NOW...OVER ONE YEAR LATER, I CAN'T BELIEVE THAT WE'VE BEEN FOOLED...”Read full review »
Mien111 via Apple Podcasts ·
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10/31/09
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“Hey, I like Bill and Ted. It adds character.”
loneoak77 via Apple Podcasts ·
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01/26/10
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“Episode 39 can't be the ending and you are leaving us hanging. Oh please write the ending.”
dottiehnj via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
12/14/09
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