“I really liked the prologue but after that the second chapter has been very difficult for me to get through. It just isn't capturing my attention. I think I'm going to keep giving it a try but I don't know how long. Some constructive criticism would be for the author not to drag on so much. And maybe it'd be easier to relate to if the character didn't have such a weird name, I mean who’s ever heard of the name Monson? And wouldn't you pronounce it Mon-son not Mun-son?”
Ocean_Girl via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
01/31/09