“This was wonderfully done.
A bit of feedback. The sudden transition to romance “can I take you out to dinner sometime” was a bit cheesy.
The daughter sounded much too old to be the main characters daughter. Or the main character sounded too young. Their relationship wasn’t convincing.
Particularly, as soon as the incident happened and she called the police, she didn’t say her daughter was coming home and didn’t seem concerned about what would be waiting for her.
As soon as they told Jess she couldn’t stay at home, Jess was concerned about packing?
The agents sounded very much the same.
Otherwise, we’ll done! Enjoyed very much.”
CarmineWlo via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
10/15/23