In this episode of When You Fic Me in the Eyes, Kitty and I unlock the only way fourteen-year-old Joey could have Joe ditch the purity ring. While we attempt to critique chapters 21-24, we also talk about Quizilla's rating system, characters with less than one dimension, testing reader's suspension of disbelief, page breaks, the intricacies of smut writing, and why I'm struggling (in general).  Follow me on Twitter @joeypcariaga! Point at me and laugh! Theme music is Run to You by my friend Islay Sinclair. Follow her on Instagram @artemismoon12draws  Cover art by my friend Annika. Follow her on Instagram @annika.sood  And remember, don't tell the Jonas Brothers about this.