Storywriting needs so help
Great premise and nice idea and execution. I just couldn’t get past the unrealistic responses, gaping holes in the story, the main character seems emotionally distant and not that bright. Sadly season 2 hasn’t started off much better. As a father of a young daughter I can tell you that sleep would be the furthest thing from my mind!
The Pied Pieper via Apple Podcasts · United States of America · 01/14/24
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The sound design is pretty well done ,but the actions, reactions and general way the characters behave is ridiculously unrealistic especially the father. The short episodes make it a nice touch so you can listen to a story even if you don’t have much time. I’ve gotten to episode 3 hoping that the...Read full review »
Mollycita via Apple Podcasts · United States of America · 01/12/24
I am trying to keep listening but the tone of these parents are KILLING ME!!!! I am only 3 /4 episodes in and it’s annoying me so much. This MOM is wack!!!! Is there even a child I don’t even have children but the tone of this I am sure would be much more urgent I’m a keep listening but I am not...Read full review »
Ty731 via Apple Podcasts · United States of America · 01/25/24
Epic score and sound design all the way through. It’s a good story. The characters could use more development. I think that would have made the the climax and end more gratifying.
NeEddra via Apple Podcasts · United States of America · 01/09/24
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