“Story started off great, got very boring fast. This story could have been great but too much focus on the main character, who I think is too simple and full of himself. Also, a good writer doesn't have to use so much profanity to get the story across. I won't finish this story. I keep hoping the next chapter will get better, but it doesn't .”
rrk1368 via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
02/15/10