Kree of Canopy Chapter Twenty-One
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In Chapter Twenty-One, things go from zero to murder real fast at Lily’s ball. I’m not going to offer any other explanation than that. I talk about how to write an effective and satisfying conclusion to your story (i.e. doing the precise opposite of what fourteen year old me does in this chapter).
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