A train wreck!
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“FormerAM on 8/28/09 summed up my feelings on this fairly well.
Just passed the half way mark and the story is so bad that I can't turn away.
Observations for the author:
Voice acting - not required but, if you do it, own it.
- option 1: if you are going to read your own work and can't do accents then just do a straight read.
- option 2: if you have to have accents, go find people who can do them.
Story: so far there isn't one. An "almost interesting collection of vignettes" is the best that I can do. There is almost a short story but without flow or continuity.
Music: 1/5 (or more) of the episode should not be comprised of music, especially not the same ENTIRE piece more than once. Give to us, your listeners, something broader. Don't pad your episode!
History: when writing a historically based novel, do some research. If you aren't willing to research, write what you know. Some of the threads had holes big enough to throw a cat through.
General word choice: Drop the hyperbole and walk away! Florid has it's place and - until you are writing for a second rate romance novel machine - please step away from that third rail.
More thoughts and edits to first thoughts later as I continue to watch the crash and burn. Hopefully I'll be eating my words...!”
TheAunt via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
06/14/12
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“I tried to like this story. I truly did but couldn't, it flat out sucked.”
flockmolly via Apple Podcasts ·
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09/08/09
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“Poorly written and compounded by extremely amateurish narration. The attempt to change to deeper voices for mail characters was very distracting. The story was difficult to follow after the first installment, and I gave up by the fourth. I hope she continues to learn and try until she hones her...”Read full review »
The Pundit via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
09/19/09
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“Great story, Excellent read, I love the great charactors. I can't wait for Nights Knights II”
stevenddickey via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
01/28/09
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