“First, thanks for bringing this special court to our attention. That’s all I got from two episodes.
I will otherwise try to make my critiques constructive: (a) please don’t assume your audience is as naive as you (“not what we typically think of when we hear ____”); (b) please focus (eg, do a separate podcast on bail bondsmen or Rikers/county jail v prison or gangs); (c) check your story (revolvers don’t eject shells, etc); (d) be journalistic or slightly more impartial (you too easily side with people, eg, the Bloods (!?!), the boy’s mother who didn’t get her bail money back bc “it was lost in the fine print”); (e) edit (just bc your protagonist says “ya feel me?” at the end of every sentence doesn’t mean we need to hear it—unless you intend that, in which case it’s a bit condescending).
Hopefully you learn and your next podcast will better.
Oh, and vocal fryyyyyyyyyyyyy........”
NYCSKIER via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
04/29/19