Mindless Banter
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“I kept listening, waiting for a turn in the story, but nothing really happens. Seems like the ending was some kind of premature cliff hanger.
The voices were somewhat confusing too... the daughter sounds like she should be the mother and the mother sounds much younger than the daughter. All the character’s personalities are interchangeable and the whole show was full of mindless banter that didn’t add anything to story. This made parts painful to listen too. For no reason, the daughter (main character) has a chip on her shoulder the whole time. Why? This also made listening painful.
Other than this first-draft-style writing, the story had potential, but waaay too many in dead ends in story.
Advice: remove the mindless banter and instead tie together some of the “cliff hangers”. This may add more meaning to story.”
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United States of America ·
07/23/19
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