“I agree with another reviewer...Too many curse words. Every other word is f-this and f-that. It detracts from the story. If a military personnel were to be chosen for such a critical mission, the character could be reasonably more calm, collected, not panicky, and less emotional during scenes of emergency. Also.... how come they were so close to things like black holes, debris fields, etc and not have detected it..?? Rather... why didn’t the computer/ship alert them sooner..?? And who cuts open a potentially harmful biological lifeform in the open...and without PPE????
Story has a lot of potential, I must say. Keep pressing!”
Navyboots19 via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
01/14/22