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“I think this is pretty good - sad when I saw how long it’s been since updated, but the episodes released are good. I would recommend.
A quick note about the creating Oc’s episode tho : This is about your Oc Artic Moon specifically, but this does apply to all your Oc’s. I think you need to work on balancing your Oc traits.
For example, you were able to list lots of good stuff about Artic Moon, but you should try to add some bad things too. No dragon has no flaws, so here is a structure on managing that.
I often pick four good things for my dragon, and three bad. If you are making a hybrid, don’t give the Oc all the possible powers from both tribes.
Example 1 - What NOT to do :
Name: Dingo
Tribe: NightWing SandWing
Powers: See the future, read minds, prophecy, animus, poisonous tail barb
Example 2 - What you SHOULD do :
Name : Dingo
Tribe : NightWing SandWing
Powers : Poisonous tail barb, and can read minds, but only to a certain extent. Their mind reading is very faint, it just helps them guess what others are thinking some of the time - it isn’t as direct as telling what their exact thought word for word is all the time.
But in Arctic Moon’s situation, one side of her genetics has frost breath while the other has fire. An easy way to solve this while keeping the character well balanced is is to pick one of the two powers instead of both.
Please don’t feel offended, I do not mean to make you upset, this is just some friendly advice on making an Oc. I hope this was helpful!
Ps. Some extra stuff I thought of - instead of making hybrids more powerful than other tribes, I like to make my hybrids have less special abilities. It feels more realistic for me, because I have a head cannon that mixing two tribe’s abilities together sort of cancels out each other, and I find following this line of though also helps when creating hybrid characters.
- Acacia The LeafWing MudWing”
dog234563 via Apple Podcasts ·
Australia ·
09/03/22
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