“Brenda,
• Hire a speech coach. Too many pauses. Learn how to emphasize words differently based on their impact and meaning in a sentence, not just on their meter. Significantly reduce the garden path rambling. Omit needles words.
• Increase the value of your content. Get to your kernels of truth sooner. Go deeper into coaching topics. Streamline your enrollment pitches; they feel too salesy; like you’re here to ‘get’ and not ‘give’.
• Seek more feedback. Your episodes need some polish tho to get out of sounding like a verbal processor’s first-draft. Try different speech disciplines (keynote, theatre, stand-up, improv), hire a speech coach, get some Beta listeners, be willing to re-record, and better content editing.
• You have a compelling concept and a valuable ideas. You have a nice voice and your recordings sound clear. It’s worth investing to improve your skill and finesse to make your show (more) listenable.”
HoChiMin87 via Apple Podcasts ·
United States of America ·
04/03/22